My presentation of my magazine went very well, I was a little nervous before presenting but it ended up going very smoothly a nd I was very happy with the feedback I received. My peers complimented my magazine, specifically my p ictures, article size and format, and my cover page. There were a few minor aspects of my magazine that were pointed out that my peers think I could change to enhance my magazine. It was suggested that I add page numbers onto my content page, add the month and year onto my cover page , make some of the font on my cover page smaller, and change the format of my content page. I was really happy with the comments my peers made because they were all either compliments or very helpful for my magazine overall. Ms. Gartland suggested adding so mething about things for adults to do as well in my feature article, but other than that and a few other cosmetic changes she said she liked my magazine overall....